Missing You

[Skywave18]

Awakening sad
pain in me
through closed eyes
I still see your face
my endless mistake
came and took you away
remembering you
drifts of sadness sink through
ill always be missing you



this is my first poem ive really ever wrote, despite it being not to good i apologize, im tryin to write to help get me through my miserable depression that wnt go away

 

[Ex-head]

i like it keep on writing on and dont stop. im srry o hear that your sad get well.

 

[New]

I've written some of my most personal stuff during a depression. Keep it up. I find it helps me work through it.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Don't apologise, I can identify with the sadness in this piece, keep writing!

 

[sunflash876]

don't ever doubt yourself, man. hope you get to feeling better.
amazing piece btw. i dig it for sure.