Midnight's Dream

[Charos]

When the cradle of midnight settles in these bones
and the night envelops,
guards,
utilizes us to it's whims
the frightened light signal fires
to desecrate her haloed covering.

Her eyes, indigo fire, draw us deeper
and section the heart to hold ourselves in the wake of war.

This world is the echo of a battlecry long past,
the fervent flight of an arrow to cut down the enemy
and loose the hounds of this guilded realm;
dogs of war that veil the neon glimpses of grandeur
that I live for.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Such rich imagery, drawn in from the first line!

 

[drEaMtiMe*@#]

^^^ me too. from the title of the piece even.

 

[katmeow]

I really liked this & the other piece you posted recently. I agree with dastrix... the imagery is so vivid. The unstructured format suits the theme too.

Short but powerful

 

[cherub]

definately a clear picture painted through the whole piece excellent work

 

[Charos]

*snip praise*

You guy's are going to make me blush... thank-you for the comments...it's always nice to hear something you wrote is relevant to someone else.