midnight excursion

[ice-9]

train ride into oblivion bliss
break your bridges down for me
nonsensical maniacal world of breath
fear is called the little death
time and passage unearthed, unfathomed
time is thine, maintain a clue
vision come to me unshackled
lest our fears convince us true

 

[alykitty]

{{Iceeie}}....

Very good, hun!!!

 

[Sara Tonin]

Short and fabulous!!

 

[MiNiMoWs]

oooooooooo.
i like!!!

 

[Angelight]

/me likes

 

[cherub]

icee, very much a piece of things to come i think !

 

[Mellabopper]

::mwah::

 

[C Divinity]

nice job

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[Dagny]

Timeless. And moving, you've outdone yourself iceeie.

 

[ice-9]

thanks.

 

[Nietzche]

Ice, always a treat reading your poems! Wonderful piece here!

 

[alykitty]

Suprised??? I think not!!!
**read it again, hun**

 

[dragonfog019]

simply beautiful.
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~poe
"all who wander are not lost."

 

[L O V E L I F E]

Icey, you're incredible.

 

[E-girl]

you da man, ice.

(((ice-9)))
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IM: tiggersgurl2067
"It's the heart afraid of breaking that never learns to dance. It's the dream afraid of waking that never takes a chance. It's the one who won't be taken who cannot seem to give. And the soul afraid of dying, that never learns to live."