metalmouth

[absurdhuman]

I am Mr. Metalmouth
Oh the heavy things I’d say
I am Mr. Metalmouth
Heavy said I’d say
I am Mr. Metalmouth
Talked the day away
I am Mr. Metalmouth
Meddled all the day

Cotton or dry is never the case
When you’ve got metal inside your face
I hate the things I’ve loved to taste
For them there is no other place

I am Mr. Metalmouth
Oh the heavy things I’d say

Don’t forget that precious tooth
Is limited to just your youth
Or you’ll be in that dentist booth
So put down that Baby Ruth

I am Mr. Metalmouth
Heavy said I’d say

But what is there for me to eat
When I’ve already had my treat
Is there nothing left that’s sweet
I’ve fallen weak down by my feet

I am Mr. Metalmouth
Talked the day away

I’ve given in to lack of will
Another one has fallen ill
I’ll pay for it via Mr. Drill
But at least I’ll get another pill

I am Mr. Metalmouth
Meddled all the day

Don’t you see another cavity
Is how I come to peace with me
Fill me up for all to see
There’s no way I’d rather be

I am Mr. Metalmouth
Oh the heavy things I’d say
I am Mr. Metalmouth
Heavy said I’d say
I am Mr. Metalmouth
Talked the day away
Meddled all the day

 

[katmeow]

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[FoxyKel]

Nice piece absurdhuman, I like the way you flow and rhyme. I'm a big fan of rhyme.

No comment on the poem, Kat? Even the mods usually manage to at least comment on the piece