Memories

[Klementine]

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TORTUROUS... wringing my innards
like a wet T-shirt
freshly peeled off of
the oily balding body
Laxitive memories
grip my gut
If only I could really

Just shit them out.

 

[EntrenchdMentalist]

You're awesome, Klementine :D

like a wet T-shirt
freshly peeled

Killer simile.

I dug the other one you posted today as well.

 

[wesmdow]

yep. its always great to shit someone out.

 

[Klementine]

yes wesmdow, there are these painful things inside me that ache and twinge and fester in my head... memories. It is not possible to shit you or them out. id rather keep my good ones, and block out the rest.

 

[wesmdow]

honey, you did your worst. i honestly cant believe you even come here.

//warn me i dont care.

 

[(Wordy)]

Again, can you guys sort things out somewhere other than on Bluelight? Instant messaging? Telephone?

We're keen for Words to take a new direction... but this isn't it.

 

[katmeow]

I can feel the wrath just dripping from the words.

Raw, but good.

 

[up all night]

Maybe I'm alone in this, but when the person who has caused the anger responds it adds another element to the writing. It makes it even more real.

I liked this one.

 

[wesmdow]

everybody loves drama.