memories

[mariacallas]

Dust. Feather fragments. The shadow of Snow. Melting from the Eyes. Flowing. Flicker through the slits. Cascades. Betwixt Blinds. Like a Hail. Of granite Rock. Or blinding white Ice. Like Rapid. Mouth movements. Beneath Parallel. Lips. Lids. The French-window Wide. And ledgered. Sunlit and Warm. Where one Length. Overlaps. Against the Next. Staggered. Like the Spine. Of a musical Sequence. Graceful. The Slats Arc. Segments. States. Of Drowning. Comprehended as. Rhythm. As Pattern. For the mind to Decipher. The Thing. Seen Complete. Swallowed Whole. Gulped and Sutured Shut. The World Halts. Between the Blink. The Conclusion. Of a Millisecond. Time. Depth. Space. Bridged. By What. This threads in Us. This Life Continues. Going Down .The Staircase. Coming Up. In Dreams.

 

[katmeow]

Very cool... very different... I like it!

 

[spinkle]

nice work hon

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

wonderful wonderful stuff!

Like Rapid. Mouth movements. Beneath Parallel. Lips. Lids. The French-window Wide. And ledgered. Sunlit and Warm

 

[i_enjoy_ecstasy]

very good and very unique:D

 

[RareForm]

good god almighty, i loved that one to death... hmm..i act surprised for some reason and i shouldn't be...

another EXCEPTIONAL piece babe...



~Drew

 

[Geez-A]

hmmm reminds me of that other one by Babra Streisand- "Memories, like the corner of my miiinnnddd"
love ya!

 

[mariacallas]

LOL!^^
thought id try a totally different way of writing a poem ....glad u like it :D:D:D

 

[PhorIndicator]

Dust. Feather fragments. The shadow of Snow. Melting from the Eyes. Flicker through the slits. Cascades. Betwixt Blinds. Like a Hail. Of granite Rock. Or blinding white Ice. Like Rapid. Staggered. Like the Spine. Of a musical Sequence. Graceful. The Slats Arc. Seen Complete. The World Halts. Between the Blink. Depth.

Beautiful imagery. Thank you

 

[Negative]

very nicely done. I love experimentation, especially when its done so damned well . . .