Man Go

[UnSquare]

Sections of peace pulled off the pear
I knew not what,
it was not there,
and to be frank
I thoguht the entire affair
was un'der the sun for
the diff'rent glare

Rays shone down on us,
it spoke to me up high,
hanging from the the cornea
of perfumed perif'ed eye
and to eat it would be strandard
but
'the sweet by and bye',
sometimes sweet fruit
feels like a lie

Down!
It fell,
pray W. I am Tell,
but those who know my salt tooth
well,
they know the story,
quell the dame resistance,
finda sa'fire distance,
surrounded in a mist
ants of circumstance
terrorfied of lapsin' fans
see
decorate the fir tree.

She chooses flavour over mint
(I'm sold easy; it'scol')
it's wint,
er...,
shint-
o shine.

I ate I pear,
volumtous wine.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

This has actually left me speechless, you have an incredible way of manipulating language for maximum effect, I'm going to have to read this a couple more times to find the meaning underneath. Wow!

 

[(Wordy)]

This is highly original, with some very inventive use of words; playing with their constituent parts, sounds, and the structure of the line - plenty of trickery.

I would like to read some more of your stuff!

 

[up all night]

Everything Unsq writes is poetry - just have a look at any of his posts on BL.

You're one of a kind, Ben. A master of words.

 

[UnSquare]

Awwww...

Thanks.
You're all real sweet.

Maybe I'll start writtin' more in here,
instead of writtin' all my poetry in 'my' alcohol thread
in Aus Social.

Ifya wanna read more,
jus' trawl the Archived Drinkin' Thread,
or the New One,
in AUSS.

An' god was I drunk as fuck when I wrote that...

Thanks again.

PEACE
UnS
:D

 

[yakksoho]

I'm laced with terrified wonder
There is no more epiphany to life than this encapuslates
Speak the world in words
And this itself is everything