make like a tree

[skjalff]

mimic the cycles of leaves in autumn
turn orange to red and grow into earth

this is existence, perpetual order
your soul that one day will be covered with moss

shove all your whining, sadness and sorrow
no final request will ever be heard

you'd think that it shouldn't be ending this early
you yearned for the closure, well.. here's what you earned





skjalff

 

[RareForm]

this is existence, perpetual order
your soul that one day will be covered with moss

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you yearned for the closure, well.. here's what you earned

quite a clencher. i loved the quoted lines.

 

[oceandreams]

i love how it says so much in such a short way

 

[RareForm]

this kind of reminds me of this

what do you think? (in terms of subject)

 

[skjalff]

haha, it is kinda like that, even more so than "kinda" I cant really recall that one from before, like it a lot, the last two lines are fucking clutch.. well you know what they say about people who think alike (loony chuckle ) btw, i got somethin for ya, check your pm ))


gene

 

[RareForm]

:D

when am i supposed to check my pm's lol?

 

[skjalff]

GOGOGO

 

[cherub]

i really liked this,, just like it says closure,,


lol you two re funny

cute boys you are lol

 

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