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RareForm

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Dec 25, 2003
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Portmeirion
Conditional quest
Binoculars patroling, taking notice
Denounce what eyes plea
Deter from overt sensibility
Your hand can only reach as far
As your mind can initiate suggestion
--The ocean is on fire . .
Or is it?
--There Elvis sits
On a park bench casually
Or was it?

How far into the congenial crevice can you reach?
Was your father there to guide you?
Was your mother there to hide you?
Penetrated
And further integrated
Into your daily worship workshop
Propel the concise sabbatical projection
Into the window of your neighbor
Holy-Conspicuous-Circus-Trotters, Batman
The crowd grows wider (wilder)
I'm there within you
It's there in script
I was almost certain I heard my name called aloud
Or was that another name..?
With a bigger shroud.
 
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You write cryptically, RareForm. When I read your stuff I get glimpses of something familiar, but then whatever it is, you reshape it into something strange. Seems you are always experimenting with ways to express things, which is something I admire. "Orthodoxy is unconsciousness." ;)

Some of your lines are really intriguing:

Your hand can only reach as far
As your mind can initiate suggestion
 
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