Loyal To Life

[RareForm]

Not one chance
But a hundred chances
Open the resources please
Tell them they're not leaning trees
You must detach yourself
New powers adorn your shelf

Born to shed healing to this dominion
Disappointed with the lack of compassion
Invited to react with an action

Pity no more, there are lives to be restored

Not one time
But a hundred times
There must be a revolution
Loaded with many a contribution
By all relations of men
No matter their religion

(We are our own Gods)

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

Very nice It was so drawing. Love it... Bye

 

[Altered_Soul9]

good shit my man, I loved this piece. Very Nice

 

[kazza_baby]

a very absorbing piece
nice work

 

[lost_boi]

i love pieces of few words that manage to much at once
and it reads so well.
love your work

 

[TiberCross]

 

[honEbee]

I love the positive view of this poem. Very nice

 

[NickyJ]

Loved it. Nicely done :D

 

[Pantomime7]

Few few words, but very nice. Haven't read any of your stuff in awhile. Refreshing and full of thought. I like.

 

[cherub]

once again i am late in replying and your awesome at writting... luvvvvvvvvvs you !

 

[Deus Ex Machina]

This is an amazing piece, I love the end. Awesome piece.