Love Subtracted

[Altered_Soul9]

I sit here alone
Thinking of days long ago
A safe haven in your arms
You took away all my fears
But you’re not here anymore
And I just sit here alone

But don’t cry
But don’t cry

‘Cause I’ll see you again
Maybe not now but someday when
This ‘ole world has gone away
It will be a beautiful day
We will walk hand in hand
You’re the one that I called my friend

So don’t cry
And I won’t cry
Please don’t cry
And I won’t cry

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

WOW that was beautiful. I really loved that! Hope all is well with you. Keep up those great writings...as I know you will

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

this is really different from most of your other writings.
Just like, those, this is great.
(not the circumstance.... )

it sounds like hope is trying to peak it's way out.

 

[skjalff]

Hey man, I just sent my comments on this on to Drew But to reiterate:

<<
‘Cause I’ll see you again
Maybe not now but someday when
This ‘ole world has gone away
It will be a beautiful day
We will walk hand in hand
You’re the one that I called my friend
>>

^^i totally loved this stanza, so simple and full of hope! Great write!



gene

 

[Altered_Soul9]

Thanks for the props, these words are lyrics and there about a member of my family who was killed in 96. This, even in its simplicity, is my greatest write.

 

[RareForm]

sympathies. great write. great song.

 

[Pantomime7]

Familiar. I love these words. Even though they are simple, they convey a deeper, mournful meaning. A cry from the soul and heart. I love it.

 

[neverwas]

beautiful...such emotion.