Lost in the found

[ForTheRush]

Some people change
Others
Change too
For some its very gradual
For some its right away
The things that change can do

Some people fade
Others
Colors stay true
Most chameleons hang
The easiest to spot
The best will end up hanging you

Some get away
Others
Have fits
Its a long way down
and a far cry out
Those who make it that is

For some its a game
Others
Its a race
Your here to play
Your here to win
It's the excitment of the chase



Found it, lost it, in the lost and found it was founded, -lost on the find-, it was, dropped, kicked, pounded, -lost in your mind-, it was, chopped, stripped, grounded, -the cost of the times-, it was, stopped, quick, down, picked up, then was, popped, flicked, drowned, chiped up, brushed off, then sold, where it was melted down, and casted in a mold

 

[xenon raider]

i liked this a lot! the mid stanzas are just downright gorgeous!:

Some people fade
Others
Colors stay true
Most chameleons hang
The easiest to spot
The best will end up hanging you

Some get away
Others
Have fits
Its a long way down
and a far cry out
Those who make it that is

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great structure and rythm. I'll look into your earlier works!


xenon

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

I like the last verse best, without form but clear rhyme. This is defnitly a stand-out piece!

 

[realm]

This piece was really really really well thought out and crafted, i liked everything from start to finish!

 

[colicolo]

Comlex and simple, i like it

 

[RareForm]

i liked that last part alot too, my mind kind of works like that some time, after i'll write a poem, something comes to mind out of sync but it still fits. i don't know lol.. anyway, good stuff.