Loose Ends - One Line Rejoiners

[colicolo]

As suggested by liquidphil, this thread is for the postings of 'loose ends', these are;

"one sentence rejoiner(s) or something that just spoke to us in that once sentence s a loose end but find that incorporation is neigh impossible"

These loose ends should be published in this thread and can be tied into the new thread 'Knots' as complete verses or entire poems created from these loose ends.

I believe that this could exhibit some great pieces of work.

Let the games begin...

 

[colicolo]

First cab of the rank:

deepest ocean of agon emotion

 

[New]

"Wreckage...bleeding through like oil from a tanker,
leaving an ever-growing stain on my mind..."


You mean like this, and then...what?

 

[colicolo]

You mean like this, and then...what?

Now members can attempt to use a collection of these loose ends to create new works and post the in the Knots thread. It may be a little difficult at the moment as there are only two posts.

 

[New]

Ah...fascinating. This seems like a cool idea.

 

[New]

Thread deserves attention...


"This road is forty ounces long, and two inches wide
it's the road to hell, no room for side to side..."

 

[Jabberwocky]

This indigo child
whose crystal eye
cry tears of visions past
where ones who had hoped but dared not dream
and in doing so created nothing.

 

[Jabberwocky]

brief but lasting were his words
perched on lips full of discovery
tumbling out and adding
to the picture of the moment.