.:LOOKiNG SKYWARD:.

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

*LOOKiNG SKYWARD*

Her hand flails
Grasps, and falls heavy
The stiff yellow shard of light
Falls and shatters.

Stifled breath
A faltering glance
Before her head is pulled
Again to the sky.

 

[StuffedTiger]

score! :D

 

[Dandy]

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Great. I interpret this as a piece about having somebody to fall back on, that person in your life that you know will be there though at times you feel alone, despite this security.


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[Dastrix Slogan]

Yeah!

 

[RareForm]

good job...i've never read your poetry before..it's good.