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Longing

*SWeeT-e*

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Do you ever long for something real
someone who would let you truly feel
who would look into your eyes and see
the person you were always afraid to be?
She paints her lips a rebellious red
and the mirror tells a sweet sweet lie
tonight he'll take her home to bed
tonight he'll make her alive.

She'll go to him when he calls her name
because she's only who he lets her be
she pretends she's more than a toy in his game
she tells herself she's free.

Do you ever long for someone true
who could know the things no one else knew
who would look into your eyes and see
the beautiful person you always wanted to be?
She tries to stop but she can't say no
and it doesn't matter anymore
she sold her soul for a line of blow
she forgets who she was before.

His hands are cold and his touch is rough
he never looks her in the eyes
but somehow she can't seem to get enough
she's already dead inside.

Do you ever long to live again
forget the heartache and the pain
find the one who would set you free
and love you no matter who you used to be?
(I'll do that for you if you'll do that for me...)
~kimmy.
[This message has been edited by *SWeeT-e* (edited 08 December 2000).]
 
Just re-reading this poem...feeling especially lonely today for some reason...maybe it's all these damn love poems. Ahhh well...life goes on and I don't begrudge anyone their happiness, even if I can't seem to find my own.
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~*~I hope you take a piece of me with you...~*~
 
Kimmy,
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Crow
 
Really really good. Painful to read, cause I've been there... But very good nonetheless. You're a great writer girl!
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If I had MY way I'd have all of you SHOT!!
 
Beautiful poem...
it makes you think; i like that
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Mellabopper
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~*~*~ meat is no treat for those you eat ~*~*~
animals are for petting!
"does anyone know where we are? because i think i dont have a clue"
 
im breathless. this poem is so deep. its something ive recently lived through. and now im finally finding myself again. i hope you find youself because thats the most important thing in the world. be proud of who you are and never forget because you are special. dont ever be afraid to be yourself and to love youself. you are important. lotsa love-jo
 
Your expression is achingly beatiful and your yearning is so strong. You will find what you are looking for.
Never doubt it exists. I'm still looking too...
PLUR
hardraverNYC
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"we must be the change
we want to see in the
world" --Gandi
 
Abosolutely wonderful hun
and one day you will find it and feel completely free
Keep the faith
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Just takes one angel to change a life
~~~~CHERUB~~~~
Aka: Mommyhen
~I still belive in your eyes~-Gigi D'Agostino
~~~I can be your Wendy, and you can be my Peter Pan. And we can fly to Neverneverland~~~
 
I'm still reading and enjoying all these words and more by you. Thanks for the sharing here. Something about yours words always touches me. Don't ever stop being an
artist.
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