Poetry Logjam

[FixXxer]

A storm forms overhead
the sky sheds a tear
you can hear the rustling of leaves
when suddenly lightning appears
and frighteningly strikes a tree

A branch falls into a below stream
joining random mellow debris
representing ideas for some poetry
spanning far as the eye can see


The log tries to float straight
but slowly it rotates
and becomes a goalie that creates
an unplanned dam

It programs a gridlock
and suddenly you cant talk
It's not writers block
It's a gawdamn logjam

 

[darvocet21]

a storm forms overhead
the sky sheds a tear
you hear the rustling of leaves
suddenly lightning appears
and strikes a tree
its branch falls into a below stream
joining random debris
all representing ideas for some poetry
but as it travels it creates a dam
no way it could be planned
suddenly you cant talk
it's not writers block
it's a gawdamn logjam

And if it was built by a beaver then what?

 

[FixXxer]

And if it was built by a beaver then what?

too funny.. i just had that thought.. and came online to see you said it haha..

btw.. i saw it all go down

 

[darvocet21]

too funny.. i just had that thought.. and came online to see you said it haha..

btw.. i saw it all go down

If this is who I think it is I'm afraid to ask

 

[FixXxer]

If this is who I think it is I'm afraid to ask

i am whoever you say i am? ... but also... more likely.. not?.. lol

 

[RareForm]

Nice one, FixXxer. Quite a creative way to express that.

 

[FixXxer]

Nice one, FixXxer. Quite a creative way to express that.

Thank you.. it is about how it is not writers block because i have a million ideas..
but i keep feeling i have to do one to do another and so on..

 

[cduggles]

its branch falls into a below stream
joining random debris

Great imagery!

 

[FixXxer]

Great imagery!

Always appreciate your comments. thank you