Little one

[Strawberry_lovemuffin]

Little gem
Imbedded in my mind;
Little rock
Under pressure.

Little dream
In my womb
Exanding, exploding
Irrational smiles

Though you're not ready yet
Little version of me,
Reflected in your facets.
Little hope

That will save this little soul one day.

Little precious... little one
I want to know you.

Pieces of earth
Coming together gracefully,
Infinitely,
In time.

 

[New]

I like the imagery in this, too, and idea waiting to explode.

Cool.

 

[Strawberry_lovemuffin]

It's actually more literal than that... it's about the baby I'm carrying at the moment (I'm 14 wks pregnant)

But yes, it's also about an idea coming to fruition because that was how it all started, a life beginning as an idea.

thanks New, I really appreciate your comments - you are a terrific asset to this forum.

 

[LoveAlways]

aw that was cool! i wanna be pregnant..

 

[New]

It's actually more literal than that... it's about the baby I'm carrying at the moment (I'm 14 wks pregnant)

But yes, it's also about an idea coming to fruition because that was how it all started, a life beginning as an idea.

thanks New, I really appreciate your comments - you are a terrific asset to this forum.

Ah, congrats on the kid-to-be, then, and thank you for the compliment,

 

[Jabberwocky]

the structure and time of your poem reminds me of foot steps tentative at first but more bold as they become sure in there serenity. great work.

 

[exoiced]

This could easily be a dialogue with the soul or soul consciousness.
It has a innocence to it maybe because of the new life you are sharing.

 

[colicolo]

1st: Congratulations

2nd: I've missed ur contributions, but i know we can look forward to some really positive pieces in just a few weeks!

 

[Mehm]

sweet and simple makes it sound. nice poem and congrats

 

[doofqueen]

so cute and sweet. I like it :D