Linear Enlightenment

[TiberCross]

complete disarray
without form or function
idolized mayhem
love or destruction?
seamless infallability
an earned dycotomy
what have you learned
discerned or (quite possibly)
intuitively understood
amidst the sublimenal
dionysis dionysis
vanity remembered

a sailor's genes
sold on imperfection
with these words....
controlled disconnection
efforts lost in time
wrath of the master
creation creator
created disaster

 

[plazma]

Now this one really really really strikes a chord.

Respect!

-plaz out-

 

[TiberCross]

ok, i'm egotistical.

 

[Pantomime7]

Great writing. I havent read anything on here i awhile and this is a breath of fresh air. Props

 

[Altered_Soul9]

This is the exact reason you are one of my favorite writers. Very Nice

 

[KaideAlike44]

Nice, I think I might want to read some of your writings on a certain substance.

 

[cherub]

thanks TC for the bump egotistical or not i am glad you did
maybe cause of content mood about the universe lately but it was smooth and enjoyable to read with a thoughts wizzing through my head as i read this.

 

[Prolapstriumph]

Great stuff, i find most all your poems i've read captivating, thought inspiring. And aside from personal creative release, thats what its all about, i s'pose. Groovin.