let it be, what it will be

[emesaeler]

the leaves teased by the breeze that crowds her eyes with wild hair flying this way and that
they still haunt this place, in the fading pink flesh around the needle they still call my name, so sincere and I know this place
and the footprints in this dirt remind us we are walking, so fast we never saw the sunset with both eyes
but we still lay on the beach at night growing dizzy looking up at the sky, covering the moon with our thumb and grin like madmen
blue blades of grass sweep by his nose as he rose from the ground where he woke the next day, eyes sparkling so full of wonder
because he knows he can fall in love again each and every night, betray, kiss and cherish this light
beautifully matured features to make me lust but the childish eyes to undo me completely
and we snuggle up tight in our bunkers, safe in mothers womb she'll protect us from the world
in ourselves we find the demons thrashing inside. let them free and be angels in disguise.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

dude::wow!



The flow is fantastically dreamy, ending so well done!

 

[jaymie]

because he knows he can fall in love again each and every night, betray, kiss and cherish this light

excellent work man.

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

HOLY SHIT.

This is the first time that I've ever noticed your screenname. I almost passed this fine piece of work up. This is absolutely incredible, leaving an awesome picture painted in my mind. I will look forward to reading more of your work.

As Dastrix said, this piece flows so well and everything fits together so tightly. I wanted to quote something, and found myself trying to figure out what was the best thing to quote... but it seems as though I just couldn't pick one because they all mash together so well.... but.... this one... right here is great.

beautifully matured features to make me lust but the childish eyes to undo me completely

Great fucking work!