Laid Down

[-=ReD-hAzE=-]

Laid down without a care,
Warm blood everywhere,
Flowing freely as I stare,
Gushing out of that pair,
Those shredded arms of mine,
Draining wicked thoughts from mind,
Together the life I had once pieced,
Numb now from this life, I ceased...


A scrap from my painful dark past.

 

[-=ReD-hAzE=-]

Bumpage...

 

[E-girl]

deep and meaningful.
hopefully your life has gotten a little brighter since then!

 

[Rollingrrl]

I like this. Its strongly worded and powerful. though I had the feeling that perhaps it was once longer? maybe you could expand on it. good job no matter what!