Kiss

[oceandreams]

Owned,
My body yeilds to pleasure and pain
Reciprocating exquisite ecstacy

I eclipse the challange

Afflicted waiting
intentionally intensifying dizzying eroctic fantasies
until the want becomes need.

Primitive glutonous desecration succombs to the hunger
release explodes.
You penetrate,

taste me slowly

Spinning the world out of control

 

[jameslovesyou]

left me drenched with warm feelings...very sensual.
nice write.

 

[aphrodite-84]

Kissing is weird, but you remind me how much I love to.

 

[New]

Short and sweet. I enjoyed reading it.

 

[Jabberwocky]

Primitive glutonous desecration succombs to the hunger
release explodes.
You penetrate,

this did it for me drawing parrallels with spirituality and sex, and the selfishness that both can acompany for only one offers atonement and the other release. great work here i loved the vibrancy and compact nature of the words. you didnt need to be verbose although i would love to see more of your work.

 

[oceandreams]

this did it for me drawing parrallels with spirituality and sex, and the selfishness that both can acompany for only one offers atonement and the other release. great work here i loved the vibrancy and compact nature of the words. you didnt need to be verbose although i would love to see more of your work.

Thank you. I really appreciate the positive feedback. I used to post on here quite a bit about 2 yrs ago. There are a lot of my pieces floating around. Of course that was when RareForm was still around here. Well maybe he still is? The embarrassing thing is I think this piece has been posted before? Working on some newer stuff that will be ready to post soon. Damn writers block.

Anyhow thank you again.