Justifiable Madness

[gonzo.pete]

Can you see with unjust cause
The reason for so many wars
I fail to find an answer true
That justifies the death of you

I miss you though we never met
Your death for nothing I regret
For liberty and freedom do
They justify the death of you

One bayonet , one fountain pen
One hundred yards for ten thousand men
For peace again and life a new
Will justify the death of you

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This one is very old-circa 2001.
Just after some constructive criticism to help me get back into writing.

 

[Mehm]

i think its great. very simple and poignant which i like. some readers/writers seems to prefer complicated pieces.. if i were to offer any critique