Just wrote this, feedback welcome

[oakleys09]

No real hidden meaning to it, let me know what you think

Feels like I'm wasted
I can't even taste it
And I'm losing my life

Some say you can fight it
I already tried that
Now I'm wanting to let go

Yeah, nothing comes easy
Does God even see me
Looks like I'll never know

 

[New]

Yeah, I've been there...pretty decent.

 

[ThunderPants]

I like it

 

[funkee]

Nice... "some say you can fight it" makes me think. did you mean something particular in that line?

 

[oakleys09]

Nice... "some say you can fight it" makes me think. did you mean something particular in that line?

Just that there are people around me that know my battles I have with drugs and alcohol, and insist that I've just never tried quitting before, whereas I have over and over again

 

[2oclockbeanfiend.2]

Does God even see me
Looks like I'll never know

well you'll eventually find out that he does or he doesn't...thats some real shit though...i like words of pain...shows you do feel...and that is whats real