"just wait"

[human paraquat]

"i want, i want"

sit closer to me love, so that i may feel wanted
you see, even the french know that some objects are women!
and if i whisper, "you are tres perfect, m'adore"
will you shrivel?
for i intend to test what will be done to a dried up flower
by an old flame.

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

This is beautiful.
Made me smile, and wince and pull my knees up to my chest.

I like this piece. And the reaction it caused.

 

[froggygirl]

^ me too..

short and sweet.. I really liked it!

 

[human paraquat]

wow thanks, those are the most thoughful responses ive ever gotten! i cant really seem to break out of this cliche love theme poetry though 8)

 

[froggygirl]

Thats not a bad thing, a lot of people can relate to that theme, and happy is good

All my good poems are depressing.. hehe