just some writing..

[Keepit Chill]

Chaos is all around
Overwhelming all I know
I'm down into the ground
My bodies melting like the snow
Depression is just a word
It's often over looked
The pain i feel is absurd
Like a body over cooked

Why must i be alone
I don't think you understand
I feel out of my zone
Like glass returned to sand

My thoughts do not originate from me
They come from an unknown source
Sometimes i just want to flee
Gallop away just like a horse

I guess I said a lot
But does it mean anything at all?
I'm all that I got
And like the snow.. im sure to fall

 

[lolz]

shows we need to slow down from time to time

 

[blode]

That's very well put, it makes alot of sense. Only criticism i'd have is that chaos seems to be a bit of a cleshe word but it's very clever. Within 20 lines you've explained more about depression and what it feels like that many books could within 200 pages.
The power of poetry aye?