just simply

[Chaotic Action Man]

"just simply"

you
flipped hair
chin cupped
deep sigh
a smile
flash white
eager intent
shared whispers
crack goes
the carrot
all eyes
turn to
look at
you

 

[Raz]

Wow that was really great!

That was like a verbal polaroid, nice one!

 

[plazma]

PLEASE READ THE FORUM GUIDELINES BEFORE POSTING!

There are to be no more than three (3) new theads by any one user posted on the front page (excluding ones that have been bumped) at any time.

Your excess threads have been moved to deleted messages. On a more practical note as well, people are FAR less likely to read your work if you just spam it all at once, its much better to post one thread a week or something like that.

-plaz out-

 

[Chaotic Action Man]

sorry plazma, i admit i did not read the forum guidlines. so my bad. i'm writing about 10 poems a day. to much crap running through my head...

 

[plazma]

^^^^^^

That's okay, just promise you won't do it again.

And yeah, I dig you on the 'crap running through head' thing.

Cheers.

-plaz out-