Just move on

[ForTheRush]

I-Don't-Look-Back
I-Just-Move-on
Once-You-ad-just
It-just-proves-wrong
If-you-find-that
Things-are-in-place
Cir-cum-stance-wipes
Your-grin-stained-face

Just move on

Just move on

I-once-knew-you
So-long-a-go
Be-fore-the-rain
Turned-in-to-snow
And-you-stood-there
Fro-zen-in-place
The-for-mer-you
In-my-mind-space

Just move on

Just move on

As-I-re-call
The-rea-son-why
You-changed-your-self
And-lived-a-lie
Was-cir-cum-stance
And-that-won't-fly
Now-when-we-pass
Theres-no-more-high

Just move on

Just move on

Now-I'm-a-lone
A-lone-I'll-be
Un-til-some-one
Ad-justs-to-me
I-don't-seek-you
I-won't-tempt-fate
What-does-that-leave
An-ev-en-break

Just move on

Just move on

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

The way the verses are laid out with the-a-line-in-between really emphasises the rhyme and makes me feel that stuck in the mud trudge when one should just move on, clever!

 

[realm]

nice dude i agree with Dastrix, very clever rhyme scheme and good lyrics to match...overall a good piece!

 

[cherub]

Clever,, you definately created the piece in the set up and lyrical writting.. quite good

 

[danzig13]

all i have to say is i love it. thats all. i love the words they way its writen everything. especially that part about the rain before it turns to snow. brillant. i just straight dig it. its awesome.