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Just let me go

DeirdreScott

DeirdreScott

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I want to open the door
I want to fall inside
I want to be adored
I want to run and hide
I want everyone to see me
I want to crawl into a hole
To disappear completely
I want to lose control…
I want to belong to someone
I want to own them too
I want to be the shaking gun
As I point it right at you…
I want to experience honesty
No matter how painful it may be
I want to end this travesty
Just tell me that you don’t want me
I want you to just forget me
You know you’ll do it well
You know it is just so easy
It’s ok, I’ll survive this hell
Your rejection isn’t new
But I want you to know
Out of all lovers I’ve been through
You’re the hardest to let go
I want to look at myself
In a mirror on a wall
I want to get some help
For I am not well at all…
 
omg that is outstanding... i feel you on this.. i think at some point in our lives we have someone or something that mirrors this poem so well.

:)
 
Thanks. I don't like to rhyme as a general rule, but I find that sometimes when inspiration hits me I just have to go with the flow, and sometimes that means that I gotta rhyme.. So long as I don't try to rap we'll all be ok. :P
 
i think we're experiencing the same wave of emotions lately.

hey, do you still have my phone number? you should call me sometime.
 
Please do call me, Rare. PM me your #, i got a new phone and I don't have yours anymore! :'( I MISS YOU!!!
 
yeah...i like the rhyming too, and like raz, sometimes it's a bit much for me.

i like the kind of restrained frenzy it gets you into. :)
 
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