just another thought

[doof-kittie]

bruised and broken
empty and falling into the abyss
screaming and writhing
motionless

 

[onetwothreefour]

short, obviously, but very nice.

poignant, even.

 

[RareForm]

poignant, yes, poignant.

nice write...

hope to see more

~Drew

 

[katmeow]

Sometimes so little can say so much.

Nice!