johnny scrugglecreature

[StatuS tickleS]

imagine a scene
an eye in the sky
bright black and pulling every thing 'nigh
absorbing and discharging matter, metaphysical and function
while simultaneously reaking influxion and destruction and nothing
a battle field where form and structure are crushed and expanding
all in one action
a subtraction, an envision, a contraption of metal,twisted, whissing past my forehead fast as the devil
immediately becoming trapped in a tree, which that very second spontaneously bifurcates into a V, level

chaos continues everywhere that eyesight will provide it room
and no sane, simple human would portend the next moment except me and you from the new center-of-the-universe extends a huge homosapien hand
unfettered by the existence-execution it fumbles around the surface of the planet until it finds me, finally, and squeezes me quite simply of every single gland

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Very interesting, are you saying that we will bring chaos because we are human, and that our own end will be a result of our own chaos?
I had to read this a few times (and look up a few words as well), I think the imagery worked well, but the subject could use a little expanding on. I look forward to reading more of your work.

I would love to hear rewiired's thoughts on this!

 

[StatuS tickleS]

i agree with the suggestion of "subject expansion". it was my original intention to delve into the details but once again my boredom exceeds

 

[cherub]

lol at the boredome exceeds comment... I hear you,,,, lol

I think this is a well written piece that has more to come i think... loved reading it