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beguiling charms

Bluelighter
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this is written for a girl who will never read it,
tho if she did she would not recognize
nor realize its author,
audience or
meaning.
merely, another lovelorn poem
a cry from one forced to admire from afar
realized such feelings to make him awkward in her presence, and out.
but unable to turn dream or thought from her
insane
confused
and unsure of what to do.
she, like him
often lost,
often sad,
both alone in this journey,
both looking for their other.
why doesn't she see
he's right there
ever waiting for her.
22.2.01
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[This message has been edited by beguiling charms (edited 22 February 2001).]
 
oh wow.... in fear of sounding like everyone else when responding to people's work, i will still say that i can feel this poem a lot - i know where you're coming from... and i know its hard.
great work though
Mellabopper
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animals are for petting!
"does anyone know where we are? because i think i dont have a clue"
"damn the man, save the empire!" - empire records
Corruption is key.
 
Perhaps she will, perhaps she won't. Her feeling the same way is more important then her understanding. Only time will tell, and tiiiiiiiimmmmmeeeeeee goooooeeeesssss by so slowly and time can do soooo much. Ahem. Sorry. I just know the position you are in and all I can say is hang in if you think it is worth it, and hell, even the pain can be worth it.
Ridi.
 
frustration indeed......
jesus
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***"without deviation from the norm, progress is not possible"f.zappa***
BE AN AGENT OF CHANGE
"one good thing about music, when it hits, you feel no pain"-marley
"there is a party in my mind, and i hope it never stops, there is a party up there allt he time, we are gonna party till we drop"d.byrne
***satori shalom***
 
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