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[mashead testing]

you dont even exist
time has missed me
something escaped from my mind
i dont think im going here
ive never been anywhere closer
to get this far away
had people come
but never stay
thoughts drag me down
a weight in my soul
no broken hearts
no gain
no foolish love
I feel the pain
Play with my emotions
as though its a game
I never now if we feel the same
how can I see the real
for love I never feel
doubting the sound
as it stops
not feeling right
I want to die
[ 06 December 2001: Message edited by: mc-bob-e ]

 

[E-girl]

you convey a feeling of hopelessness in this poem (and i very nicely worded poem it is, btw) but i've read some of your other works, and you are far from hopeless. keep your chin up. things can only get better.

 

[cherub]

bob i was really impressed with this work. one day luv

 

[TecknoticDream]

That was beautiful,Awesome job