Isendra

[harraser]

Once upon a time
This never happened.
In another place we didnt exist
And the rain pouring down our faces
Fell to the pavement with nothing to stop it.
Nothing in it's way.

Winds blow through empty spaces.
There's a sound to hear if you dont exist.
Only for a moment then it's gone.
It's all gone.

There's a far off place,
A world where we never were,
Where colors never seen before
And sounds that caress
Are completely unconcerned
With me and you.

Darling
Can we go there
To the place where noone cares?

We'll be lonely,
You and me,
Pining
For all the things we threw away.

Darling
Can we go there
To the place where noone cares?

Please?

I miss you...

 

[plazma]

Sweet fucking jesus Ant...

You've outdone yourself on this one, its got that calm feel of contemplation and abstraction in it, mixed with the urgency of desire.

Effectively, I'm reading this over and over again and I'm absolutely stunned, I'm not sure what I should say.

Its a great poem, Its the kind of thing that makes others feel your pain, see through your eyes. And that's what poetry is all about.

-plaz out-

 

[vurtomatic]

very evocative, really like this

 

[cherub]

you know i have always been fond of your work luv,

But this i totally loved reading and have read it several times over.

Love you bud
cin

 

[neverwas]

There's a far off place,
A world where we never were,
Where colors never seen before
And sounds that caress
Are completely unconcerned
With me and you.

Darling
Can we go there
To the place where noone cares?

We'll be lonely,
You and me,
Pining
For all the things we threw away.

i always love reading ur work babe...specially this one.i read it three times and each time i re-read it i got a feeling of sadness, and as i read through it more and more the feeling increased...its an undescribeable peice angel and the only word i can find to descride it is...it made me...sigh... the feelings come alive in this.youve made it so it is so easy to relate to and understand the perception and feelings of the way its written.your work is wonderfull ant.

kel.

 

[up all night]

*bump*