is this it

[valo7333]

i can't find middle ground
and this time around
i know that i have found
the same thing i find everytime
because i realize my rhymes
aren't worth a dime,
no one's cares
or shares their despair
with me
or anybody
because it doesn't build up
it builds down
and throws your world upside down
i feel like a clown
in God's circus
and he curses
the day i put down the make-up
and decided to wake up.
i expanded my mind
and realized that our generation won't shine
through the shit covered window
of time and tradition
and i just can't stop wishin
that in one single flash
the world is over.

 

[cherub]

I like the flow of this one,,,,, good stuff

 

[skjalff]

lol, I thought of eminem's rhymes reading this, quality stuff, liked both the emotional feeling and the style a lot!


skjalff