Invisible (last post)

[zero9zero]

i feel i'm wasting my time and energy posting in this fourm. so due to lack of interest in my works, this will be my last "words" post.
Ripping a vague crack in your
Life repelled again all human
Nature
Now a phenomenon never seen
Nor heard
A sin to deny your creation
No reply from whom you rely
Abandoned to cry while
You're dying
The serpent has shed
With the burden of your head
Silent alone
In the world of the dead
Patience seeked but denied
For a time and bestowed on
Those who surround you
Reeking of your worthless exsistence
An odor scent, that smothers the truth
The death of life
Repeat your words as you
Fade away from sight
Shedding tears through invisible
Naked eyes
To suppress an uncontrollable
Urge to be alone
Resistence maintained is
Useless and futile
Betraying to deny your eternity
Persistence to clean your
Unseen filthiness
A starving soul of impurity
Shining through
Once invisible
Time withdrew
Now invisible
Dave

 

[Angelight]

i wish u did not feel that way, b/c i want u to know that i read everyone of your posts. There are alot of posts that get no response...simply b/c it leaves the person reading speechless. I enjoy reading your work, know that i read it, but sometimes it is hard to respond to feelings so strong. Don't post in this forum for a response, post in it b/c you want people to read your thoughts. I read them, and i enjoy reading them, you are gifted, don't stop.
love
angel

 

[RaveAngel]

I agree. I read your posts too, an get something out of em each time. So don't think that people aren't reading/enjoying/appreciating your work. Because they are. I mean, I know it's nice when people comment on your work, but if they don't, that doesn't make it any less valuable. To yourself, to me, to them. Sometimes all people can do is just listen, ya know? My advice would be to keep on posting... but it's up to you. Oh, and by the way, I really liked this last poem of yours. Quite dark, but I guess it compliments the mood I'm in... or rubs salt in it for my gluttony of punishment.
*muahs*
Ski
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"Shine on you crazy diamond....."

 

[CARESS]

I feel the voice crying out in the desert deserves as much respect and attention as the one who cries out in public. Are the lonely man's words any less valuable? No.
But you are not in a desert and your work is respected here. To leave would only serve to rob you of a creative outlet and us of the pleasure of reading your work.
I have posted some pretty painful and horrific topics here. There were times my true life friends and loved ones didn't even respond...not out of indifference or lack of compassion, but out of shock and speechlessness.
I agree with Angelight and RaveAngel...think it over, okay? I would miss your work.
Caress

 

[Noodle]

I read all your stuff too.
reconsider...
ok?