inspection

[tokenname]

i can view your home, from mine.
unsound in structure.
with eyes shuttered; ears distracted -
deathless sirens refuse to drown.
drafty upon settled twilight.
tools; obsessively stocked (with concern.)
leaks must come with heavy rain.
and oh, my love, the wind.
nesting anywhere a ray dare peek through.
even your foundation angles, inconsistently.
yet..those walls - begging intrusion.
granting entry, only, when outside movement sounds..
til it vanishes - by step, by circle, by glide.
exception: fucking sirens.

 

[thujone]

thanks, it was a pleasure to read

 

[tokenname]

^

 

[ForEverAfter]

Agreed. Very nice.

 

[tokenname]

nice. thank you.