Infinite Dreamer

[New]

Shrouded in weakness, I wait in the wings
Looking around at the state of decay
Shivering and crying in absolute rage
That those most in pain are causing the rotting
The uprisings I've seen are disorganized riots
Quashed by the oppression they sought to end
Seething resentment from every angle
My cloak disintegrates from the pure discord
I can't lie in wait while others do nothing
Waiting for the actions I know need be taken
My soul's fury inflames my every blood vessel
My anger, for once, has my heart shining bright
To lead by words is an honorable action
To lead by action collects kind words
Both alone dissolve under their own pressure
Connect action to word and the world is yours!

 

[noodlebongsheep]

great piece of art, vivid imagery and excellent metaphor

anyone of us has the opportunity to make the world shape it self around us, but i think out of self intimidation we let ourselves be shaped by the world

 

[stonerfromohio]

I liked this a lot man.... best part:

Both alone dissolve under their own pressure
Connect action to word and the world is yours!

 

[lostNfound]

I liked this, got a cool rhythm to it. I found myself chanting most of my way through it.

 

[New]

Thanks, guys. I put a lot of my own personal power into this.

 

[cosmic charlie]

Great Job Sam :D

 

[swilow]

Very good, Venom of God :D Your poems have a real ritual-like intensity to them.....Me likes.