In response...

[ButrosButros_Grantos]

All it takes, is for me to hear those first few chords
And I’m nearly yours again, after all this time.
It’s stupid isn’t it, saying that I am nearly, when I never was.
Perhaps it just felt right and that was enough?

That entire time when we were at our worst,
Falling and cascading and bouncing and sometimes hoping.
We were good for each other, even though it wasn’t to be,
And while it was never real (so you say), it was for me.

Because you were the one that could put a smile on my face,
And the one that I would lose my friends to race home to.
The one I learned to trust a little more above others.
And inevitably the one that ended up hurting me.

 

[neverwas]

awe babe...

Because you were the one that could put a smile on my face,
And the one that I would lose my friends to race home to.
The one I learned to trust a little more above others.
And inevitably the one that ended up hurting me.

that was beautiful...

That entire time when we were at our worst,
Falling and cascading and bouncing and sometimes hoping.
We were good for each other, even though it wasn’t to be,
And while it was never real (so you say), it was for me.

its weird how lil things even something as simple as a chord in a song can remind you of someone...

your writting is at its best when youre trying to express something mulling over in your mind.

*hugs*

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

Beautiful and poignant.
Loved reading this.

Such a gentle accptance of something that would have been so turmultuous.

 

[ev0l]

very good

 

[katmeow]

I liked this one a lot, it's so simple, yet it touched me emotionally, which I think is the mark of a good piece or work.

 

[RareForm]

All it takes, is for me to hear those first few chords
And I’m nearly yours again, after all this time.
It’s stupid isn’t it, saying that I am nearly, when I never was.
Perhaps it just felt right and that was enough?

That entire time when we were at our worst,
Falling and cascading and bouncing and sometimes hoping.
We were good for each other, even though it wasn’t to be,
And while it was never real (so you say), it was for me.

Because you were the one that could put a smile on my face,
And the one that I would lose my friends to race home to.
The one I learned to trust a little more above others.
And inevitably the one that ended up hurting me.

word x 2

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

I could not have said this better myself.
This hits very, very close to home.

 

[up all night]

Memories are crazy things but possibly the one thing I'm glad I have no control over. 2005. God.

 

[Raz]

Good bump.

 

[Jabberwocky]

+1 for good bump. Sometimes memories revisited can put to rest old demons. Congratulations on facing a memory, its doesnt happen to often and with open honesty