Impossible I

[co.1nspire]

Just some random ramble...

I hold this crutch with style
Didn't you Know?
I'm crippled inside
I've been dead for a while.
When where what was I?
Not Wondering Why
How high have I been?
I Dipped up at the top
Tripped down drip I drop
Dived into a dream
In silence I screamed
The tear couldnt say
My eyes were too dry
Too tired to stay
I hid in the haze
imagined I appear
Before I was one
Being now i am none
Became nothing no one
I'm not really here
Here I'm not real
Not even near
I've disapeared
Destination Nowhere
If ever why was?
If never who what?
However I?

 

[(Wordy)]

I really like these opening lines, they lured me in:

I hold this crutch with style
Didn't you Know?
I'm crippled inside
I've been dead for a while.
When where what was I?

I like the general wordplay of the piece too. Good stuff!

 

[wesmdow]

i read it like a rap song.

i can imagine that as an outkast lyric, with bigboi rhyming.

haha maybe im just stoned. its good tho, i like the way you intertwine your words and ideas, and the overall flow of the piece.