Imperfections

[KaideAlike44]

I peer at the image in the mirror
a tormented reflection is horrifying to see
a broken, saddened person, the person that is me.
In horror and lament I shatter the glass
hoping that the reflection from my mind shall quickly pass.
Little shards of imperfection sparkling on the floor
thousands of images of what I saw before.
Tiny images of a shattered,imperfect, ruined me
reflections of imperfections is all I'll ever be.

 

[angel!na]

Little shards of imperfection sparkling on the floor
thousands of images of what I saw before

I thought this line was really good word imagery.

(((hugs)))

 

[frostyangel]

This poem reminds me of something I wrote.. http://www.bluelight.ru/vb/showthread.php?s=&threadid=23850&highlight=Broken+Pieces

So if you would like to read it please do..

 

[Altered_Soul9]

I agree with everything you wrote. For myself of course. Very Nice

 

[cherub]

Loved that way this was written, very smooth and heart felt. Great imagery

 

[Pantomime7]

I can easily relate to this piece. The words flow with continuity and somehow I see my reflection within the mirror. Awesome depiction of ones' self and powerful imagery. Very, Very nice

 

[DG]

this poem makes me sad. very good imagery as others have said