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Hemlock

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Rhythms rolling round the room
Lights looking, licking faces to the boom.
Bass bins barking,
Biting, bouncing bones.
Beautiful beats, beautiful.
DJ is okay,
Spinning on whims,
Marvelous musical montage.
Bathroom lines,
Girlfriends whine,
Boys wait against the wall
As feet shuffle down the hall.
Alcoholic stumbles,
Incoherent mumbles,
Smiles around and walks away.
Fashion feats.
Broken beats.
A secret society meets
For transactions made discreet.
Friends flock together,
Loners look at lusty leather,
Everyone has a purpose.
Dancing divas, discoteque darling.
Gyrating guys gather, gawking.
Symphony of sound, surreal.
Swimming in speakers sounds so sweet.
Rollers ready, rocking and reeling
Feeling tingling
Heavenly ascending highs,
Show up, blow up, sighs.
Scintillating sea of sounds
Surprising sustained staccato
Breathtaking bass boom
Aural explosions fill the room.
Primal percussions
Vicious vibrations,
Derelict discussions,
Other world sensations.
Emotions escalate,
Moods elevate,
Masses move to the music,
Loving life, living for the night.
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Author's note: Note one of my better ones, but what do you want from someone scribbling on napkins during a nice buzz?
[ 12 January 2002: Message edited by: Hemlock ]
 
the words were great very vivid but the main reason i'm replying is for the authors note about scribbling on napkins during a nice buzz...hehe i thought i was the only one who did that! :) i've have since then started carrying pens around whenever i go out and a small notebook tucked into a pocket because i find it very hard to read crumbled smeared napkins the following morning...
 
"Emotions escalate,
Moods elevate,
Masses move to the music,
Loving life, living for the night."
you capture the feeling very well.
nice work!
~lil
 
Hehehe nice one, I've seem this particular image more times than I can count... Even attempting to count them would be impossible (mostly because my memory isn't as good as it should be ;) )
Regardless of whether or not you think this is good, it paints an image very well, possibly because its one which is so familiar...
Again, nice work :D
 
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