im too high

[wesmdow]

draft 2

im too high
to read these words.
i wonder why!?
but its never been great...
other's ideations blur my eyes.
brain dull
says my so called 'ally'
glowing screen
i "hang on untill eight"
pixelled patterns
so i rely
in between
urge to procreate
the ladders
its nearly july...
formed
perfect to sedate
by letters
a fresh blue sky
climb
a different date
the wrong direction,
again im high
(if youre aiming to get high, that is.)


i cant think, i cant talk
(right)
fucking hell if i can walk....
i can sit here, and type my thoughts
and right now, thats all i want.

draft 1

im too high
to read these words.

other's ideations blur my eyes.
brain is dull
colored screen
and the patterns
in between
the ladders formed by letters
all climbing the wrong
direction, if you want to
get high, that is.

i cant think, i cant talk
(right)
fucking hell if i can walk....
i can sit here, and type my thoughts
and right now, thats all i want.

 

[colicolo]

this line really made me reflect:

and right now, thats all i want.

thankyou for sharing

 

[Solitude_within]

Indeed, that line makes you think about what you want in your life. And by life, I mean RIGHT NOW. Like, get up and fuckin' go for it.

 

[wesmdow]

i made some SIGNIFICANT CHANGES to the second draft.

what do yall think of the new poem?