i'm lost

[Chaotic Action Man]

these things
held in hands grasped
tight and yet
sliping through

never feel it coming
only see it passing
slowly turning over
fading out passing in

how can we
who know nothing
ever hope to be
something

life lost
love
colors fade and
ash of food
turns in the mouth

try to
hope for
want contact
reach out yet
long gone are
you

i'm lost and losing
the way back seems
far to hard slipping
wishing for another chance that
will never come

you said to trust fate but
i can't trust anymore

i miss you
i need you and
the only way is to let you go
------

life is simply to painful at times. a terrible beauty that lulls you into believing that it won't hurt. not as much, and not this time.

 

[haste]

Nice stuff - this belongs in words

 

[Chaotic Action Man]

no clue there was a words section. i'm new hehe

guess a mod will move me.....hey mods, calling all mods.

 

[FoxyKel]

Welcome to Bluelight, you write beautifully

Moving this piece over to words.

- |{elle

 

[FoxyKel]

life is simply to painful at times. a terrible beauty that lulls you into believing that it won't hurt. not as much, and not this time.

That stuck a chord with me.... I read it over about 10 times.

 

[katmeow]

/\/\

What Kelle said!!

Nice work

 

[Chaotic Action Man]

thanks for the compliments *big wide grin too big for the smilies big wide grin*

 

[*c_ride*]

i like it i think its because of the way your phrases work, you can read them in any order up and down the page and you still get the idea. thats hard to do.
nice job

 

[Angelight]

i loved this.

 

[honEbee]

I think we've all been there. Only some of us can't express it so well. Nice work.