I'm Here.

[rewiiired]

I'm Here.
by Rewired
5/20/04

Another touch of torture
with the promise of resolution.
I cannot concieve of the future
but the official stance is a good omen.

I waited so long;
just long enough and
the time is right.

I waited so long,
and the last few days
have been so fucking surreal,
and I just might...

...be coming out of my shell:
carefully, cautiously,
gracefully, steadily
blossoming...

... be coming out of my shell:
to let myself drown in this,
to let myself go wth you
in exchanging smiles, matching rythms,
feeling so atune with you...

So just keep me focused;
let me leave that
nihilistic pessimism
far behind.

Reality can wait.
The future can wait.

So just let me
channel the intensty that's
constantly fed back by you;
let me get lost in the beautiful flow
that's naturally brought on
by your presence.

Maybe I found
who I need right here
maybe you're all
that I need, my dear.

I'm so comfortable here,
it's almost frightening in this light.
Lost on this bed in the
shifting gaze of your mood eyes,
should I be so amazed?
And shouldn't I be more afraid?

You are my intoxication.
You are my liberation.
I waited so long,
and finally I'm here.

Finally, someone
brings me here.

 

[Dekloren]

.......................Wow...

 

[Chaotic Action Man]

this flowed really really well. i like the rhythum. you always choose words very carefully, and in this, like others, the result is a great bit of writing

 

[Dandy]

Wow!.
Excellent.

 

[katmeow]

I'm so comfortable here,
it's almost frightening in this light.
Lost on this bed in the
shifting gaze of your mood eyes,
should I be so amazed?
And shouldn't I be more afraid?

You are my intoxication.
You are my liberation.
I waited so long,
and finally I'm here.

It's an amazingly powerful feeling when you meet someone who makes you feel like this. You capture the essence of it perfectly.

Outstanding work as usual