I'm following two homeless guys... You?

[MACstar]

These are the lyrics to a song I wrote. I'm kinda bored, sorry. This is about friends and girlfriends turning their back on me when I needed them the most.

When one is homeless,
It just means their hopeless,
Don't give em' no chance,
Failure is their stance. Failure is their stance.

Change.
Can ya spare some change?

The pace of intoxicated waltz,
That demeanor of yours,
Turning false.
Your eyes wide, expecting truth.
Her cheeks milk-white, excepting ruge.

It makes me sick, you make me sick
It makes me sick, you make me sick.

I liked to think of you on my list of friends,
Well just go on ahead and dig yourself a trench,
Your a prince among fiends, bouquet to stench.

When on is homeless,
It just means their hopeless,
Don't give em' no chance,
Failure is their stance. Failure is their stance.

Change.
Can ya spare some change?

As I go walking by, my reflection. In your eyes.
You dressed in Sex last night. Now in Sundays best.
All you said was, "Hi"

It makes me sick, you make me sick,
It makes me sick, you make me sick.

Your a Harp among chimes,
Poetry to apologies.

Well I'm homeless.
Cause I'm fuckin hopeless,
Don't gimme no chance,
I'm a car with no brakes I'll crash. I'm a car with no brakes I'll CRASH.
I'LL CRASH!

fin.

hee-hee.

 

[peacelovedope]

Beautiful man, those are some incredibly deep lyrics. I still think you should go with my idea from the other thread and write a book about the whole ordeal, but if you're more of a lyricist than so be it.

P.S. I would be very interested to learn more about your time among the homeless. As long as you don't mind sharing, PM me sometime.

 

[MACstar]

For sure peacelovedope

 

[peacelovedope]

Thanks man, I look forward to hearing about it!

 

[bpayne]

as a fellow songwriter I'd like to say DOPE lyrics, I'd love to hear the melody you have to go along with it, also if your looking for a collaboration maybe a few bars of rap to go in the bridge or something I could write a verse for ya... anyways
great work!!
B

 

[MACstar]

^ I will send you a PM when I have a good amount of time peacelovedope. I have been a lil busy lately with serving the queen bees needs lol.

bpayne^ thanks man. It is an interesting melody indeed. Just pure rock and roll. But I fuck wit da hip hop too. I'll post some some lyrics on here soon, madd crazy jive stupid fresh kickin it live B......Sorry about that, I'm buzzin.

When it comes to hip hop I'm all about Nas, the Alkaholiks, Wu-Tang, KRSONE.
And as for rock, I like Say Anything, Armor for Sleep, Mars Volta, The Devil Wears Prada, Between the Buried and Me, iwrestledabearonce. All kinds of shit.