~illusions~

[neverwas]

chaos.
torment.
power.
seduce me.

pain.
pleasure.
fantasy.
make me tremble.

dream.
security.
nothing is as what it seems.
the world alludes me.

bruises on my breasts.
claw marks on my skin.
remind me of how sexy you are.
how and where this all started to begin.

prick me with ur needle.
i want to be controlled.
forever in your service.
forever i am yours.

 

[FixXxer]

im not good with comments, but this is great.
dream.
security.
nothing is as what it seems.
the world alludes me.
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its so true, whenever you think something is it. you find out otherwise, not always. but more often than not. Great

prick me with ur needle.
i want to be controlled.
forever in your service.
forever i am yours.
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i dont know if im getting the right message, but it sounds like some fun times all in exchange for freedom... ugg.

 

[StuffedTiger]

(I'm bedazzled)
........................................I don't care
(I'm bedazzled)
........................................So you say...
(You knock me out)
........................................I don't want you
(You bust me out)
........................................I don't need you
(You burn me out)
........................................I don't Love You
(You love me)
........................................Leave Me Alone
(You squench me out)
........................................I'm Self Contained
(You light me up)
........................................Just Go

(I'm bedazzled)

(You quiver)
........................................I'm fickle
(You litter)
........................................I'm cold
(You shiver)
........................................I'm shallow
(You drive me wild)
........................................You make me sick

(You knock me out)
.........................................Don't get excited
(You burst me out)
.........................................Save your breathe
(You burn me out)
.........................................Cool it
(You love me)
.........................................I'm not interested
(You squench me out)
.........................................Too much effort
(You light me up)


I'm... not available.

 

[neverwas]

^^^^ did u write that? i liked it

thanx for the replies i always love it when they are different.

 

[StuffedTiger]

no I didn't write it but I loved your poem and it reminded me of the song Bedazzled by Nick Cave and Anita Lane. I am however responsible for the graphic interpretation

 

[neverwas]

 

[Rollingrrl]

you are art in words hon. I loved this one.

 

[StuffedTiger]

bump

 

[LostProphecy]

Very much, seductive and meaningful. I loved this one. Thank you for sharing.

 

[neverwas]

thank you

 

[skjalff]

This is Awesome!!! I dont want to repeat the people above, i just agree..

great work again!




skjalff