I'll love you forever.

[mmmmSeXyE]

I can't stand alone
but we can't stand together
I hate you now
but I'll love you forever
to you it was just
an innocent request
for surreal happiness
but your perfect mistake
was my worst heartbreak
if I could
I'd reject you
and I should
but I can't follow through
you know everything I want to say
even if I say nothing at all
and I'll leave it unspoken
because you already know
I'm heartbroken
and I miss you
I don't know how I should begin
to forgive you
but I do know
where I don't want to end
and that is being without you
so until I find out where to start
piecing us back together
I'll continue to hate you now
knowing I'll love you forever.
[ 09 April 2002: Message edited by: mmmmSeXyE ]

 

[up all night]

I love this poem.
But I hate this situation.
I know exactly what you mean.

 

[skarazira]

wonderful. no words of encouragement needed. you know youre good

 

[KHsweety03]

erin i love you with all my heart
i always have
and i always will
nicely expressed words... keep writing.

 

[E-girl]

this was just plain awesome. nice phrasing.

 

[frostyangel]

very nice!!

 

[pothead469]

your poem sums up exactly how i feel right now.