ill logical

[atri]

pull out of the parking lot
clutch, shift, gas
ive been here a hundred times before
but this time its different
the street lights strike a chord
reminding me of a place i havent visited
the future playing backwards in my mind
of a time when ill be ok
and when things will be different
but ill still be me
and then its gone
like wisps of fog dancing on the outskirts
of a town called atri
and a world in which he is
atri

 

[Liquid69Raver]

nice work atri

 

[SilverMoon]

i like it.

 

[KaNdEbUtTaHfLy]

i really like the entire thing, but this stood out to me, i really like it.

reminding me of a place i havent visited
the future playing backwards in my mind

 

[atri]

the feeling i got was kinda like deja vu, but different. i dunno, i had to write about it
atri

 

[cherub]

i like the imagary in this poem alot,, i am always one for good visualation in poetry

 

[antinazi77]

very interesting, almost as interesting as jizmak

 

[BeinGeneric]

how hard is harder than the rest?
eRIC