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Idolize Insanity

DeirdreScott

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Your vain imaginations
Your uncontrolled lust
The vapid considerations
and disregard for trust...

They make me feel disgusted
They make me want to curse
On the inside you're old and rusted
But still these things can be reversed.

Why do you stay the same?
E V E R Y S I N G L E D A Y?
What are you doing? You're insane!!
Only you can make it go away.

I lift my humble glance up-wise
I'm trapped by your fathomless eyes
I see that you're all the things I despise
And yet Idolize...
 
Pish? Expound upon this phrase, please... I have a great desire to know what it means... Is it a derogatory term? Or is it a compliment to my poetry?
 
pish is an interjection i believe, expressing disdain i think.

i've witnessed this first hand- it's sad to see. nice wording.
 
Disdain you say? How terribly rude! How can one person hold another in contempt for the thought process that occur within, eventually pouring themselves upon paper with intents to share this viewpoint... This poem is what I feel... It must have struck a sensitive nerve...
 
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