Ideas of the Government

[KeepJimMorrisonAli]

little weed little alcohol
one legal and deadly
one illegal and healthy
roll a little drink a little
live a little die a little
politicians lie a little
weed is illegal and god made a mistake
it doesnt make sense for gods sake
im done, im out
god doesnt make mistakes

this sounds amazing to me but i'm really messed up right now, wanted to write it down so I could read it sober~

 

[up all night]

No one here gets out alive.

 

[KeepJimMorrisonAli]

Alright I'm sober right now, I really think that's a pretty amazing poem. Mainly for one reason, which is that I had absolutely no intentions of rhyming for ANY of that. I realized that 'a little' was the end of 3 sentences, but had no means of rhyming deadly and healthy (not really a rhyme, but sound similar) or mistake and sake. I'm not really a poem person, in fact I think this is the first one I've ever really written other than for school, so it might just be me that thinks it's good Let me hear everyone elses opinion.